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by bmj2728
Fri Jul 10, 2009 2:23 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Saxual Dealings
Replies: 0
Views: 647

Saxual Dealings

This is the beginning stages of the intro to my forthcoming(knocks on wood) shorts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51p6cKOyW38

Thanks for taking a look.
by bmj2728
Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:27 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: 'Frank 'N' Steve' my new cartoon..
Replies: 3
Views: 1178

Nice work here. I'll look forward to episode 2.
by bmj2728
Sun Jun 28, 2009 5:03 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: A simple space ship, comes in for a landing.
Replies: 10
Views: 2009

This is excellent work. Is this part of a bigger work in the making?
by bmj2728
Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:29 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Scooter Turn
Replies: 14
Views: 3501

top notch work. Very realistic.
by bmj2728
Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:34 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: experiment with backgrounds and camera work on a still image
Replies: 2
Views: 1143

This looks great. It's got a great style. The camerawork looks great. The only criticism I have is that the smoke from the gun barrel looks weird. I actually wasn't sure if it was supposed to be smoke or a trail for the bullet. Otherwise, though, top notch work.
by bmj2728
Fri Jun 19, 2009 8:36 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Night That Was Dark - Short Film
Replies: 11
Views: 3352

The first thing that comes to mind is the word impressed. Something I noticed and I think it was what sythsin was trying to get at initially, is that the scouts all seem to have the same head/face, but with different hair. South Park actually handles kids the same way(pretty much). I think it works ...
by bmj2728
Thu Jun 18, 2009 12:15 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Cubing Out!
Replies: 10
Views: 3340

Love the series. So relatable. Time Management will hold a special place in my heart.
by bmj2728
Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:51 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: Sign Of the Butterfly
Replies: 16
Views: 4147

Great work here. The characters and sets look great. I also really liked your camera work. The animation of the characters looks pretty good too, but could definitely use some polishing. I don't think there's an issue with there not being enough movement, so much as a disparity in some scenes as to ...
by bmj2728
Wed Jun 17, 2009 1:57 am
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: My First Real Head Turn...
Replies: 6
Views: 1814

Looks great. Feels more like a camera motion then a head turn though. Maybe adding a bit of a dip and some movement to the hair would add a little life to the character. Keep it up.
by bmj2728
Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:49 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: A Few Short works
Replies: 0
Views: 602

A Few Short works

Hi everyone! So about a month ago I decided that I should learn how to animate using Flash. Standing in my was was my complete and utter lack of any skill when it comes to drawing. Not wanting to let that get in my way I started spending some time practicing. I felt pretty confident in Flash after a...
by bmj2728
Mon Jun 01, 2009 8:16 pm
Forum: Share Your Work
Topic: my 2nd animation!!
Replies: 12
Views: 2812

This looks great. Your depth effects are particularly good