A bit too slow on the reveal, but otherwise, very nice. Can you please explain in more depth what you mean slow on the reveal? It just drags on too long without much happening before the leaves part. OK, I got the point. So the intentionally slow tempo could be OK, but some attractive action should...

synthsin75 wrote:A bit too slow on the reveal, but otherwise, very nice.

Can you please explain in more depth what you mean slow on the reveal?

Here's my latest animation, just a really short one mainly as a practice. I've learnt some new techniques, so here I animated frame by frame, and the background/nature elements were painted separately as pixel graphics instead of vector graphics. I worked with image sequences and some individual png...

SimplSam wrote:An amazing piece overall - with some great animation and scenery.

My greatest issue is that you have created such a nice Winter scene - that it feels spoilt when Spring comes along!

Thanks for your nice words.

chucky wrote:The crow was particularly good, the slide was a nice touch.

Thank you.

Overall a nice little short. I particularly like the backgrounds. I think the sound design / mix could do with a little more polish. For example I found the laser shots out of place. Story-wise I like the idea but am not sure about transforming the crow/raven into a colourful birdie. It felt like a...

A really really nice one. Compliments. Your storytelling is rather unusual to me so I was surprised from scene to scene. In a good way, of course ,) My only remark would go towards the stereo. The crow is a bit too far on the right channel while it sits in the middle of the scene. Audio / the sound...

w3rew0lfgirl_99 wrote:How adorable! I love it.

Thank you.

This is my first animated short created with Moho Pro 12. Any comments that help to get better are appreciated. Thx for watching it.

https://vimeo.com/260500361