Hey everyone! I'm fairly new to Anime Studio so I've come here several times to figure out how to work out some problems I've run into. I'm currently working on a new series called Versatile Reality. My friend writes all the scripts and I do all the animation. My workflow so far has been create models in Adobe Illustrator, export as .psd, animate in Anime Studio, the piece together clips and other effects in Adobe Premiere. So far we have three shorts out with more on the way! I'd love for everyone to check it out and give me some feedback!
Space-Time Continuum:
Siamese Twin Fight:
Piss Bucket Challenge:
Thanks everyone!
I look forward to hearing from you!
-Nate
New Series - Versatile Reality
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VersatileReality
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Re: New Series - Versatile Reality
Nice voice work.
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The piss bucket episode was like... on a different level altogether!
I think the carrot is an awesome character.
Well done!
I think the carrot is an awesome character.
Well done!
Re: New Series - Versatile Reality
Well, OK, just remember that you asked for feedback...
I stopped watched 8 seconds into the first one when I saw the title. Stoner humor has been funny exactly never. Unless they get stoned and then get crushed to death by a falling airplane or something. That'd be entertaining.
The second one was at least short but contained the always abysmal "bleeped out cursing." Not one swear word was necessary, and bleeping it just makes it worse. Especially when you factor in that many of the curse words weren't bleeped. "Dicklicker" is OK but "damnit" isn't?
The third one went on about 3 minutes too long. It was all setup for no payoff, and what there was got ruined by all the other characters laughing for as long as they did. It did have a nice tag when we cut back to the beer bottle but that was about it. Also, the wimpout ending saying that it really is a good cause instantly wiped out whatever edge this was trying to have.
OK, how about some good? The animation is well done. At one point the carrot shrugs his shoulders and it looks VERY nice. The character designs are very nice and I especially liked how the bottle is actually translucent. The voice acting is actually that: acting! What a refreshing change to hear real emotion in a piece!
With better material, this could be quite enjoyable.
I stopped watched 8 seconds into the first one when I saw the title. Stoner humor has been funny exactly never. Unless they get stoned and then get crushed to death by a falling airplane or something. That'd be entertaining.
The second one was at least short but contained the always abysmal "bleeped out cursing." Not one swear word was necessary, and bleeping it just makes it worse. Especially when you factor in that many of the curse words weren't bleeped. "Dicklicker" is OK but "damnit" isn't?
The third one went on about 3 minutes too long. It was all setup for no payoff, and what there was got ruined by all the other characters laughing for as long as they did. It did have a nice tag when we cut back to the beer bottle but that was about it. Also, the wimpout ending saying that it really is a good cause instantly wiped out whatever edge this was trying to have.
OK, how about some good? The animation is well done. At one point the carrot shrugs his shoulders and it looks VERY nice. The character designs are very nice and I especially liked how the bottle is actually translucent. The voice acting is actually that: acting! What a refreshing change to hear real emotion in a piece!
With better material, this could be quite enjoyable.
~Danimal
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VersatileReality
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Re: New Series - Versatile Reality
Thanks for the replies everyone! I'd still appreciate some more!
@Danimal, thanks for the constructive feedback!
@Danimal, thanks for the constructive feedback!