Sign Animation WIP

macmonkey_1975 · Post by **macmonkey_1975** » Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:02 pm

Hi Guys,
Here's a little animation that I'm working on. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
cheers everyone
Dave

lwaxana · Post by **lwaxana** » Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:24 pm

This looks great, I like the designs. The only thing that seemed odd was that he stops and faces the camera before putting the sign in the ground. Maybe this is to match voiceover narration? But after he turns to the camera, it doesn't look like there is any change of facial expression to indicate that he decides to suddenly plant the sign in the ground. I wonder how it would look if you took out that part where he turns to the camera. Overall, it looks really nice!

macmonkey_1975 · Post by **macmonkey_1975** » Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:15 am

Hi lwaxana,
Many thanks for you kind comments and great feedback

Yep i know what you mean about the facing camera bit. I'm thinking it would be good split the action between the walk on and the planting of the sign so that I can add more time as necessary. But he is looking a bit vacant at the moment so I will probably add a a little look around to decide where the sign is going to go

Thanks again, and have a great day.

lwaxana wrote:This looks great, I like the designs. The only thing that seemed odd was that he stops and faces the camera before putting the sign in the ground. Maybe this is to match voiceover narration? But after he turns to the camera, it doesn't look like there is any change of facial expression to indicate that he decides to suddenly plant the sign in the ground. I wonder how it would look if you took out that part where he turns to the camera. Overall, it looks really nice!

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