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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:45 am
by cheyne
Nice on the update, the evil guy looks good.
PARKER definitely post your script mate, never hurts to have a few extra eyes looking over your writing
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:49 am
by PARKER
I will do it soon.
Im not really asking for suggestions, im just showing my work here.
I now the character desings are not impressive, i can do lot more than that, im doing it on porpose, im want to keep every thing simple including the script so its easy to animate.
You will find challenging animation tasks in the script, though
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:48 am
by PARKER
Ok, i wrote the script first in my native language, now im translating it so here i show you the first 4 pages of it in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T23W43YF
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:53 pm
by tonyg
Sorry Parker, maybe a silly point but the 'Warrior Scar' character seems to have his feet on the wrong legs.
e.g. big toe on the outside of the foot.
Probably doesn't matter but, after the scar, was the first thing my eyes went to on the first screenshot.
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:02 pm
by Víctor Paredes
PARKER wrote:Ok, i wrote the script first in my native language, now im translating it
Can you post the spanish script for all us the lot of spanish speakers of the forum?
Thanks
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 3:30 pm
by PARKER
tonyg wrote:Sorry Parker, maybe a silly point but the 'Warrior Scar' character seems to have his feet on the wrong legs.
e.g. big toe on the outside of the foot.
Probably doesn't matter but, after the scar, was the first thing my eyes went to on the first screenshot.
You are right about that, i just realized about it yesterday, its a silly mistake and i will fix it today, thanks for remember it to me.
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:03 pm
by PARKER
selgin wrote:Can you post the spanish script for all us the lot of spanish speakers of the forum?
Thanks
The first 4 pages of the script in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format, english and spanish:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=EBSEMIII
Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:11 am
by Rudiger
Thanks for sharing these work in progress pictures with us. It looks like it will be truly epic!
Everyone's going to have a different opinion when it comes to style as it's a very personal thing. All an artist can really do is make something that looks good to them. No doubt there will be some evolution as you start animating them, just like what happened to the Simpsons characters over the years.
Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:38 am
by kellz5460
storyboards!!!!!!!
thats how to do it...
Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 5:48 pm
by PARKER
New character i have been working on:
Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:44 am
by PARKER
The first 8 pages of the script in microsoft word document 97-2003 .doc format:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=T23W43YF
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 12:56 am
by PARKER
Warrior Scar first Bgs:
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:54 am
by ccrock4t
The white dog-like character looks awesome! I want to watch the animation.
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:56 am
by PARKER
I will showing my progress everytime i can:
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 6:49 am
by Rudiger
Holy crap! This is looking full-on professional!
I love the wispy cloud effect you got for the sky. It almost looks like broad brush strokes and it's hard to believe it's vector! I'm guessing you made extensive use of AS's brushes to get that effect. Do you cover this specific effect in any of your tutorial, by the way?