Posted: Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:16 pm
@ingie01 - thanks for the useful feedback. I think I'll water the acrylics down as you suggested and do the next one. The final one will be in watercolor so it pays to improve as much as possible. Still not too comfortable with this as I never really had to think about the way different colors work together before but I'm having fun so what the heck. 
@mr. blaaa - that was part of my intent in posting. I saw some threads in cgtalk (in fact I posted this there as well to get as much feedback as possible) that showed WIP from concept art to finished piece and I find them very useful.
You are right on the pencil work. I'd been more of a 'doodler' through the years only rarely doing some detailed stuff with pencil and ink when bitten by the bug. Someone on awn.com pointed out that I use very short strokes for sketching and should try to go for smoother longer lines and I am struggling to break some of these bad habits and drawing with my wrist.

@mr. blaaa - that was part of my intent in posting. I saw some threads in cgtalk (in fact I posted this there as well to get as much feedback as possible) that showed WIP from concept art to finished piece and I find them very useful.
You are right on the pencil work. I'd been more of a 'doodler' through the years only rarely doing some detailed stuff with pencil and ink when bitten by the bug. Someone on awn.com pointed out that I use very short strokes for sketching and should try to go for smoother longer lines and I am struggling to break some of these bad habits and drawing with my wrist.