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It looks like a first pass, but it's a clever gag anyway. Hope you have time to "plus" it up a bit more.

You have the right spirit. Your work is fun and witty. Keep on going!

I hope my last post didn't come off as negative about the club. I just meant to say that the general emphasis in the voting is on technique (compared against frame by frame). But in the real world audiences enjoy and find value in animation based on their own criteria.

Some updates, getting a little happier with it. I like the exit run better.

mrmoi2000 wrote:I like the exit run better.

Very definitely. The slingshot effect on the neck was great!

I had another idea while I am working on my other entry. Through this together real quick:

I love your new take on this audio! It's clever and it also fits the mood of the audio well. I think a different set of gestures/poses that play up the negotiation/manipulation? during "you should never make important decisions while you're upset" would sell it even better. Nice work!

Ha - nice! Very clever use of the dialog!

Funny choices, and well staged, too. My only suggestion is to add some secondary actions for Eve. A few eye shifts, a blink or too, maybe a blush or an eye-roll.

willf wrote:Funny choices, and well staged, too. My only suggestion is to add some secondary actions for Eve. A few eye shifts, a blink or too, maybe a blush or an eye-roll.

Yeah, I just mocked that one up real quick and if I was entering that one and had the time I would have added some motion to her (out of town since Thanksgiving).

Wasn't going to do one this month, but threw this together real quick. I like parts of it.

Tremendous piece of work and good execution and animation...

First pass at this month's audio (from Bridesmaids):

Final version of January's (realized I never posted it):



Final version of last month's still finishing around the same position:


First pass on this month's (I have a feeling it won't pass the censors):

First pass at May's audio:

Maybe the final version (or close):