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Hello all! Here's my best so far!
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 7:53 pm
by thatjoshguy
Just wanted to say hello! I've been using Anime Studio Pro for a while now, and have lurked long enough, now it's time to show you what I can do!
Here's a little something I made recently that I consider my best work so far. I also have several early versions posted as well at my site. Please take a look and tell me what you think!
http://www.thatjoshguy.com/home/display ... m=13&pos=5
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:06 pm
by slowtiger
Wow! That clip has style! Very very nicely done, convincingly enough as cutout. Good poses. Personality right from the start (scratching himself).
Just some minor points: I really hate it when a title takes longer than the story. Yours is 40% of the whole video.
I think his head turns are too slow - a bit snappier would've been nice.
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:11 pm
by thatjoshguy
slowtiger wrote:Just some minor points: I really hate it when a title takes longer than the story. Yours is 40% of the whole video.
I think his head turns are too slow - a bit snappier would've been nice.
You are correct. Those titles are sloooooooooooooooow. I should've animated more, or jsut done without. My OCD makes it hard not to fill up the timeline with something just to match the music, LOL.
I see what you mean about the head turns as well. Maybe i'll re-work it once more for good measure...
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:45 pm
by ulrik
I love it, the character, the art work and the story, great start!!
I agree about the too long (in time) title
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:58 pm
by thatjoshguy
hmm... If I clean it up, would Ulrik mind donating some of his beautiful accordion music? tee hee hee...
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:37 pm
by slowtiger
ulrik plays akkordeon? *perk*
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:47 am
by Barry Baker
This is great! Bags of personality. Well done.
Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 8:13 am
by Kadoogan
I like it! Imaginative use of a simple character design. I love that kind of thing. Certainly some snappier animation in certain parts would help it along, and the titles are longer than necessary, but overall a very nice effort.