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Layoffs -- a how-to guide for soul-less corporations
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 10:02 am
by sirjer1
My first stab at animation using Anime Studio Pro (or any animation program). A short comedy about layoffs.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lnW6GsMBLMg
Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 1:56 pm
by areyouguystwins
Cool. I'm sure most people won't relate to it ... but I do because I am unemployed. Joy!
Love the bit about the health insurance. But one can't talk about *that.* Especially if you live in America. It's against the rules.
I don't know if you had a fun time making the animation but it really shows through that you did. I really enjoy animations that have "soul."
http://www.youtube.com/areyouguystwins
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 8:54 pm
by sirjer1
thanks -- it was fun to make, though it certainly took a lot of painstaking work too...especially creating the characters in a way that they'd animate smoothly
Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:39 am
by Canny Valley
Nice work.

Writing, voice-acting, and pacing were all good. I really liked the noodle-arms. Character design was good given the simplistic drawing style you used.
Comedic timing could perhaps have been improved a bit, but I know you were deliberately going for a very sedately-paced style reminiscent of a promotional video. Art and surface also could have been better, but it wasn't a deal-breaker at all.
areyouguystwins: You're kidding, right? In this economy? I give us a month before unemployment goes mainstream.
Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 4:21 am
by sirjer1
Cool, thanks much.
Yeah, I tried to keep the characters (and, well, everything) pretty simple. I wanted to concentrate on the writing and the comedy and such, rather than go for flashy animation.
Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 10:27 am
by chucky
Great script sirjer1, the real gold is in that script.
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 9:09 pm
by sirjer1
Thanks, Chucky (delayed reaction, I realize). I'm actually making this into web series. Should have the first of the new episodes up online in a couple days.
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:27 pm
by Austrailian_dogs
Great script sirjer1, the real gold is in that script.