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I've deleted this script beacuse I no longer plan to use it. I will post a finale one that Im satisfied with that will be use.

Change in plans.

Scrawl out a couple uh drawings and record some audio-

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVN1XiuE ... annel_page

That way you can get a better feel if it's going to work or not on the visual level (as you can see by my storyboard, that dog wouldn't hunt, so it got pitched)-

It's a little more work but then again, animating is a lot of work-


(I'm assuming Yo is a green tiger, you never actually stated it)


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back to the drawing board and celtix.

cool-

ah i'll start over again and pitch this crap be ready to see a new script. I wonder if i being too picky.

It just seems like a very short script. Is that only a portion?

sinclair wrote:Scrawl out a couple uh drawings and record some audio-

Sinclair is right. Draw your story as an animatic. It's easy to create and keeps you motivated as you invest the many hours to finish an animation project.

Don't give up. Break up the project into small tasks and reward yourself at each step.

I find that I'd rather share a storyboard than a script just because screenplays can be interpreted on a per reader basis-

With a story board you can see the concept more clearly-

Plus you'll have a better idea of just how much animation (workload) you'll be getting yourself into-


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Im having a writer's block. All the scripts I started disatisfied me and I threw them away. Im going to delete the one above but hopefully I'll have a new one in it's place.

Please write a story about a little piece of cheese that wants to sing karaoke but nobody lets him in the Japanese karaoke booths because there are signs on the doors that say 'no cheese sing' so he becomes a hobo cheese and then he sings songs about how down on his luck he is, and then a manager comes around the corner and the cheese is singing his woes away in a gutter, and the manager guys hears it and signs him up for his record label, 'Big Cheese Karaoke Records' then the cheese becomes a star and when he wants to go back to the Japanese Karaoke bar to be all smug with the bar owner, he finds the karaoke bar's been turned into a cheese factory.

maybe after the first episode.

Mikdog, that was hilarious.

Mikdog wrote: the cheese is singing his woes away in a gutter

I'm glad mr. cheese didn't fell in the sewers, because he can get out of the gutter any time, but he can't get out once he fells in the sewer.
You might not have heard of a saying, because i just made it "out of gutter into the sewers"

mikdog wrote:...when he wants to go back to the Japanese Karaoke bar to be all smug with the bar owner, he finds the karaoke bar's been turned into a cheese factory.

How often have we heard that tale of woe?