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my first clip , please I need your comments
Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:05 am
by hany rabi3
hello, this is my first clip after a long time of self learning
i will be very happy with your comments and advises
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OJbW6vzVqbk
Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 12:23 am
by Víctor Paredes
this is pretty good. I like the anticipations and head turns. I think you have been reading this forum for a while, don't you?
Just one think I think you should care on another short. The sound is pretty annoying and it's full of sounds cliches over and over. Try to find some "normal" stuff, I mean, not all sounds has to be "funny".
But, anyway, it's all about the animation, and you have made it very well. I'll keep my eye to see your next works.
Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:00 am
by PARKER
Nice work, i remenber that my first animation wasnt as good as this one.
keep it up.
Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 8:44 am
by Imago
Goos work!
Improve soundtrack, on internet there are a lot of free sound sites.
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:38 am
by hany rabi3
thanks for all your notices
it will help me sure
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:29 pm
by spoooze!
Animation looks good. Sounds... not so much. If you can get the sound FX right, you'll have something pretty good here! I'd recommend just losing the sounds and finding some nice royalty free music. There's a ton on Kevin Mcleod's site:
http://incompetech.com/m/c/royalty-free/