Moho Animation Forum

Please give suggestions for this character.

Looks pretty good.
Maybe due to its detailed construction you can make a close up of his face, where I could be found some improvements tips.
-G

I'd simplify the deltoid, oblique and ab muscles. I think less detail will look more natural in those places. I have to keep a mirror handy, myself.

This is an interesting project.

Ehi, it's good!
I think it's perfect...

Thanks to all for helping to come best result.
Modified character. Please give your suggestion for this.

You should make him a ninja...and also a turtle.

Nah, kidding. It's perfect.

which techniques are you using for the shadows?

The correction on the hair makes his head look better.
I prefer the more detailed chest like in the first image. Anyway the drawings are quite good. Some animation would make it more interesting
-G

It's a beautiful work, walktoon. I just think the left arm is a little weird, it looks as if it were just scaled by the bones, maybe a little of point accommodation could improve it.

Thanks to all for your nice comments and guidance.
I hope this will be better. Please give suggestions for this character.


Just masking is used for the shadows. Black color is filled all the shapes in the masking layer. Layer Blur radius is 3 and the Opacity is 35%

Nice work! Here's a quick edit...

Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting

walktoon wrote:Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting

No problem, you're already doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work!