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my dojin anime

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 7:16 am
by aogo
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RWgpaBMvbpA



Thank you for your viewing

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Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 8:51 am
by Imago
Ehi! Excellent work!
I liked it a lot! :wink:
The song are ripped from somewhere or are your original?

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 10:02 am
by TheRoger
Nice, I liked it :D

Posted: Fri Jan 22, 2010 11:56 am
by super8mm
It's great except for two areas that are uncomfortable. The sideways walk cycle where it says "little b" is unnatural. The other is the closeup in the last shot does not resemble the character the chin line is too square.

Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 4:24 pm
by lwaxana
Really nice character and her personality comes through well in the animation!

The part where she touches the book, I couldn't tell what I was looking at at first. I thought you had spliced in an "adult" scene because the book is a similar color to her skirt. :)