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Shaving Cut? (HOW TO BE A MAN- Episode 2)

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:39 pm
by spoooze!
Here's a brand new episode of Mr. Flowerpot's HOW TO BE A MAN!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISa_WFZpSjE

Check it out and please leave a comment!

Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:56 pm
by sbtamu
LOL funny stuff :D

Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:15 pm
by lwaxana
lol Awesome. I really like how Mr. Flowerpot gets bigger and Mr. McLippy gets smaller as Mr. Flowerpot chews him out. That visual representation of the relationship dynamic speaks volumes and it's timed perfectly with the action. Nice work! :D

Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:22 pm
by J. Baker
HAHA, always funny and slightly strange. :D

Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 11:00 am
by AmigaMan
That's great :D Excellent writing, voice work and animation. I think the only thing that could be improved is the composition and framing at times. Remember the rule of thirds and also leaving 'talking room' in front of a character. Mr Flowerpot especially seems to be right in centre of frame or too far right at times. This is most noticeable when he produces the chainsaw as there is a lot of empty space behind him which feels awkward. I'm guessing you framed it that way to avoid having part of the other character in shot? Cheat and shift him out of the way for the Mr Flowerpot shot :)

Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 2:01 am
by spoooze!
Thanks for the comments guys! Subscribe on YouTube if you like our stuff!

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Posted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:48 pm
by scilencer
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