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School Champloo Episode 2 Anime
Posted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:57 pm
by kellz5460
Episode 2 of my anime....cuz i'm bored enjoy
Synopsis:
Rei decides to make a Ghost in the Shell movie
Heita finds out Asano like Rei
The teacher Mr. Takahara assigns partners for the History Project
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gafELUnjMuQ
BTW comment- tell me if it sucks and if you want me to die in a fire or i'm ok
Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:17 pm
by kellz5460
nobody likes it? or hates it? waah
Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:29 pm
by sbtamu
It is the weekend and this forum is slow during this time. I have watched it twice since you posted it and still thinking of things about it....
Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 6:29 pm
by kellz5460
i know- i'm just starved of constructive criticism
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:51 pm
by neeters_guy
Your character designs are appealing, but avoid relying on cliches to show emotion (floating hearts, gushing tears, chibi faces, speedlines, etc.). Focus on telling just one story completely with fewer characters.
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 2:04 pm
by kellz5460
thx for replying-
i'm actually purposely doing those things because this is more of a fan parody of the anime school rumble which is rife with lame jokes and full of cliches
as for the story- this show really has no story- its just about the one girl Rei that likes to make movies and theres some lovey-lovey- thing going on between her, her friend and some guys at school
I'm actually going to incorportate alot of parodies of different animes as I progress with this show