Shinobi Noir- Chapt 1 3minute anime-ish thing

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:00 am

meh...i was bored and depressed so i made this thing- The monologue intro ends like at 0:45 if you dont want to listen

watch here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZH87LHJcVFQ

EijiNizuma · Post by **EijiNizuma** » Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:40 am

I thought it was great. You could maybe tweak it a little by working on some of the walking shots or little nuances like eyebrow raises, twitches, blinks etc when someone is in shot and not doing anything. But overall I thought it was fantastic and bordering on pro anime. very inspiring.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:43 am

thx- i'll admit I wasn't happy with the walking animation but I redid that several times and still didn't like it - but, i'm still learning

KOMBATMATTT · Post by **KOMBATMATTT** » Fri Apr 15, 2011 9:37 am

looked really great but the walking animation looked abit funny, why where you depressed?

neuromester · Post by **neuromester** » Sat Apr 16, 2011 1:00 am

I really like it. I think it looks great.

shift · Post by **shift** » Sun Apr 17, 2011 6:35 am

Wow, excellent