Page 1 of 1
My new animation
Posted: Tue Aug 09, 2011 8:23 pm
by iomsys
Hi all,
you can see my new animation on youtube .. . Insector.
Please, any advice is worth taking (sorry for my english, i'm french)
Friendly, Laurent
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TOuK7uhBAQ
Nice Animation
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:08 am
by guhitgalaw
Nice animation. You have a potential as a director.
Cheers,
Gilbert
_______________________________________________________________
www.guhitgalaw.com - animation news, tutorials and more!
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 11:42 am
by CGArtFan
How long did it take for you to make this animation?
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:12 pm
by iomsys
Thank all,
I started the opening scenes a month ago almost to the day.
Friendly Laurent
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:41 pm
by 2ner
There are several good things about your animation, like the writing and character design. There are several things that bug me though, like the smoke, washed-out overexposure in tractor scenes, and the strobing corn plant in the side view of the race car tire.
Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 7:55 pm
by iomsys
2ner wrote:There are several good things about your animation, like the writing and character design. There are several things that bug me though, like the smoke, washed-out overexposure in tractor scenes, and the strobing corn plant in the side view of the race car tire.
That is why I would show my anime on this forum. I have a lot of work to get to something decent. But I am in no hurry, it's a hobby not my job.
thank you for these critical,
Friendly Laurent