Moho Forum

jag animerar en barnbok och skulle uppskatta lite åsikter.
Med vänliga hälsningar johannes

Part 1-7 (working on part 8-20)

http://vimeo.com/68277787

http://vimeo.com/68406668

http://vimeo.com/68559066

https://vimeo.com/68277901

http://vimeo.com/68802568

https://vimeo.com/68836733

http://vimeo.com/68836732

no one liked it? :-/

Nicely done. I love the style and atmosphere. The artwork is very beautiful.
I would like to know how this will be presented? Will this be part of an interactive book or simply animated cut scenes as video?

Joppa wrote:no one liked it? :-/

Give it some time for people to see it. You posted on a weekend (and it was beautiful outside at least for me). It's only been a couple of days.

I like it.

I also like it, you are telling a story well and I like your illustrations!

Snyggt jobbat

Nice artwork, but cheap animation. Basically it's just shifting stuff around without real movement. The propeller doesn't turn, the bird and ant don't move their legs, and so on. Let the animation be as good as the designs!

Thank you! There might be an interactive book if I will be ready.

sorry. The weather is nice here as well

heyvern wrote:Nicely done. I love the style and atmosphere. The artwork is very beautiful.
I would like to know how this will be presented? Will this be part of an interactive book or simply animated cut scenes as video?

Joppa wrote:no one liked it? :-/

Give it some time for people to see it. You posted on a weekend (and it was beautiful outside at least for me). It's only been a couple of days.

Thank you very much!

rocky53204 wrote:I like it.

Illustratören är proffs. det är inte jag Tack så mycket Thank you.

ulrik wrote:I also like it, you are telling a story well and I like your illustrations!

Snyggt jobbat

thanks for the criticism. A little harsh. But that's what I asked for perhaps

slowtiger wrote:Nice artwork, but cheap animation. Basically it's just shifting stuff around without real movement. The propeller doesn't turn, the bird and ant don't move their legs, and so on. Let the animation be as good as the designs!

Joppa wrote:thanks for the criticism. A little harsh. But that's what I asked for perhaps

slowtiger wrote:Nice artwork, but cheap animation. Basically it's just shifting stuff around without real movement. The propeller doesn't turn, the bird and ant don't move their legs, and so on. Let the animation be as good as the designs!

There's a difference between what you want to hear and what you need to hear.

There are two ways to ask someone to go to hell. One way hurts and the other way make them asks for directions.

nice.. it's pretty easy to fix the lack of movement in bird, ant, propellor that slowtiger points out .. just a couple of extra sprites maybe with fast switches between them? Given that the artwork was done by someone else, either they can do the "different poses", or a quick burst with photoshop (or whatever) should do the trick. The thing I'd fix is the child's slippy feet / out of sync step SFX in http://vimeo.com/68802568

people in the afterlife sitting opposite each other at a long table that's 2 metres wide, with food in front of them with 2 metre long chopsticks which must be used to get the food. Hell: trying to feed yourself; Heaven: feeding the person opposite you... It's the same place - how you experience it depends on how you treat the people around you.

[quote="hayasidist"]nice.. it's pretty easy to fix the lack of movement in bird, ant, propellor that slowtiger points out .. just a couple of extra sprites maybe with fast switches between them? Given that the artwork was done by someone else, either they can do the "different poses", or a quick burst with photoshop (or whatever) should do the trick. The thing I'd fix is the child's slippy feet / out of sync step SFX in http://vimeo.com/68802568


Thank you. Much nicer criticism but the same meaning. Images were originally just one layer.This time, I make no changes. But the next project will be to hopefully better. I have learned a lot of things, I think. Thanks again everyone!