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I hope you enjoy this latest episode of "The Monster Show", and thank you for checking it out. It's 10 minutes of silliness.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5kXqcEAEgI

The material is well written and funny, the music and voice work are credible. The weakest part is actually the animation. This isn't meant as a slam on Bill Chambers, he gets the work done. But, boy, if you had some polished character designs and animation, this would be a winning series.

Also, imho, Gloria's last name should be spelled differently, like Teetys, so it's not so obvious.

Anyway, fun series.

One minute in and already a second "bleeped curse word" joke inspiring an instant window close. Too bad. It looks like it could be funny as the outsourcing joke was quite good. It's animated well enough to get the job done, but I didn't feel like sticking around to see how many more times the already not funny and overused "bleep joke" would be used.

I agree with Neeters. This show definitely has potential, just needs to be polished visually. I did like some of the small details, like the reflection of the reporter and cop in the bank window. Overall very funny.

Thanks for the feedback, folks.