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I don't know if I need to give feedback on a certain number of pieces before posting my own, so if that is the case, feel free to delete this.

I'm running a Movember Donation Campaign through my website, with the stipulation that for every $50, I would randomly choose 2 words from a list, and make an animation based on them. The second one I got was "Galaxy Singer". My mic wasn't working when I went to record the dialogue, so I was forced to improvise; which I fully embraced. Take a look.

http://youtu.be/MzVfKM3saqM

After looking at some other work around here, I realize I am not on the same level as a lot of you, so please be gentle in your critique.

Interesting cartoony style and the silent film sendup was well done.

The characters' break points on their arms and legs were plainly visible, you may want to look at that in future animations. Also, the set looked a little more like my living room than a space ship, but that's neither here nor there. Overall it was well done.

Thanks Danimal! I made the characters before I realized how amazing smart bones are, so I'll definitely be putting some time in to make the characters more solid. I appreciate your feedback, thank you.