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so people were freaking out about how intrusive the xbox one is with the connect watching you and always having to be connected to the internet and stuff, so we took it to another level with this cartoon let me know what you guys think

Nice use of limited animation. Used as a joke or not though, I tuned out for most of this after the main guy said "brah" early on. Never funny, even when making fun of people who say it. Good premise though, kinda Aqua Teen-ish. Ending song is a classic.

thanks for the feedback ya i still have limited animation skills so i try to work around that

Humor, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder. To me, humor is the hardest genre to pull off and for me you hit it quite well here. I was laughing at several of the takes like stretching and "my dad owns a donut shop" and the "10 pathetic seconds later" screen. Timing is good, you don't wait around and try to rub anything in, just keep 'em coming.

My animation skills are limited too but this forum is great place to learn, and it's obvious you put some work into the lip synching.

Funny, good topic, and extremely relevant how "big brother" is taking over, not just watching anymore but controlling us. Keep up the good work, and please put more accurate hours on your next Starbucks time-sheet!