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Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 7:43 pm
by lawnmower70
And they keep on coming :) Just did my first 11 second club submission. Here it is!



Let me know what you think!

Re: Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:50 am
by eric1223
Well I like it. The thing I like the best is the angry/annoyed guys face at the "Happy Burger". I also like hows hes not wearing gloves when dealing with the fries (because I am not the customer), and that hes having time putting them into the fry box.

Nice work!

Re: Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 2:48 pm
by Danimal
It looks good and it's funny. I studied that poster in the background for far to long and STILL couldn't make out the last word. I'm sure it's a joke, but I can't read it to get the humor.

Re: Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 5:07 pm
by lawnmower70
Thanks guys! The last word is Soiled, probably not the best font to use for that, but wanted the whole poster to look dirty, and I guess it does that ok.

Re: Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 6:34 pm
by lawnmower70
Changed a couple things that I thought of after submitting to the competition, but wanted to improve it so here it is.


Re: Lawnmower70 11 second club

Posted: Mon Feb 17, 2014 6:47 pm
by Danimal
Nice tag. The timing is just right on "bursting."