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"The Government Force" Prologue

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 1:39 am
by DonnyCage
The world is on the Brink of Collapse. Just as the President is on the verge of a breakdown, an unlikely visitor pays him a visit with a message of hope... and a plan of action...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HvDWHriTw4k

Re: "The Government Force" Prologue

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 1:43 am
by baphomet
Very nicely done! Great job, I love the way it is backed by sound!

Re: "The Government Force" Prologue

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 2:43 am
by DonnyCage
baphomet wrote:Very nicely done! Great job, I love the way it is backed by sound!
Thank you! I have a lot to learn. It's my second animation... Just getting started doing this stuff...

Re: "The Government Force" Prologue

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 3:04 pm
by Danimal
I enjoyed the Terminator music and the Terminator-like opening. Several things made me laugh throughout: the guy saying "NOOOOOO!" after being compared to Mexico, "Women's Opinions," and Jesus's reaction to the Creed CDs that are suddenly just there out of nowhere were a couple that got a good chuckle.

The character design seemed a little off, for instance Obama's neck sticks way out from his shirt collar.

Also, the concept of Jesus talking like a normal guy with slang is not a joke that will last more than about 1 line. I don't know how much more there is to go of this, but I can kind of see this premise getting a bit tiresome after a while.

Re: "The Government Force" Prologue

Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2014 3:31 pm
by DonnyCage
Danimal wrote:I enjoyed the Terminator music and the Terminator-like opening. Several things made me laugh throughout: the guy saying "NOOOOOO!" after being compared to Mexico, "Women's Opinions," and Jesus's reaction to the Creed CDs that are suddenly just there out of nowhere were a couple that got a good chuckle.

The character design seemed a little off, for instance Obama's neck sticks way out from his shirt collar.

Also, the concept of Jesus talking like a normal guy with slang is not a joke that will last more than about 1 line. I don't know how much more there is to go of this, but I can kind of see this premise getting a bit tiresome after a while.

Sweet! thanks for the feedback!

I noticed that with Obama's neck. I'll get it fixed. I got a little lazy on that.