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DFA Part 1! FEEDBACK Please!
Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 1:57 am
by spoooze!
The first part of my new movie "Death From Above" is released!
I'd appreciate your feedback!
http://home.earthlink.net/~jtn1989/hiya ... /id77.html
Thanks!
James
P.S.
Mr. Blaaa, Trevor, and Dan. I have not forgotten you! You are still scheduled to animate!
Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 2:31 pm
by earhoney
Hey lookin good.
I was anxious to see what the characters would be like after you wet our appetite with a couple of pictures from Death From Above.
I really like it! Good Stuff
Im a real procrastinator and I hate that, but watching your toons makes me inspired.
Could you please tell me how you do your mouths for lip synching?
Are they on a separate layer than the head?, in a switch layer or just animated by hand?
Thanks in advance
Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 10:40 pm
by red hamster
Hey, not bad at all.

Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 12:33 am
by spoooze!
Thanks guys
Would you please tell me how you do your mouths for lip synching?
Are they on a separate layer than the head?, in a switch layer or just animated by hand?
They're animated by hand with the sound imported into Moho.
James

Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:01 am
by jorgy
Spooze and crew:
I must say, that you are moving along quite nicely.
I'm anxious to see the creature itself, and the suspense is building. I want to see what those "thumbtack" looking things are that keep killing people. I also saw a short test you did of the creature, so I'm anxious to see it in action too.
As things keep getting better, the number of criticisms I have keep going down. First, I'm really glad that the annoying voice of Bob is gone! Finally!!!! Secondly, I think the pace needs to be picked up a bit - the editing a bit tighter. The animation is getting better and better, i.e. the walk cycle of the 2nd construction worker.
Keep it coming!
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 3:26 pm
by Regul8R
Way to go Spooze!! I can see you're improving greatly. Its a big-leap from LBs Time Machine, well done.
Only critiscism is this: Make the credits shorter, in regards time. 30sec should be enough for 3-4min piece.
Keep Up the Good Work 'Fella.
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 11:50 pm
by spoooze!
Thanks for replying all
jorgy:
I'm anxious to see the creature itself, and the suspense is building. I want to see what those "thumbtack" looking things are that keep killing people. I also saw a short test you did of the creature, so I'm anxious to see it in action too.
You'll get to see it in part 2
First, I'm really glad that the annoying voice of Bob is gone! Finally!!!!
lol unfortunantly for you I'm gonna make plenty more Lucky Bob cartoons. I'm thinking of even making a sequel to "Time Machine". It's gonna be better than the first though. I'm gonna try and make it funnier.
Secondly, I think the pace needs to be picked up a bit - the editing a bit tighter.
Ya, I'm gonna work on that.
The animation is getting better and better, i.e. the walk cycle of the 2nd construction worker.
Thanks
Regul8R:
Way to go Spooze!! I can see you're improving greatly. Its a big-leap from LBs Time Machine, well done.
Thanks
Only critiscism is this: Make the credits shorter, in regards time. 30sec should be enough for 3-4min piece.
That's gonna be the only credits sequence for the whole movie until the last part. All the parts eventually are gonna be combined into 1 file so those credits will be short compared to the animation portion of the movie.
James

Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:16 pm
by spoooze!
Updates on Part 2:
Almost half way done! Will post some still images soon!
James
