A couple weeks ago, Will and I went out and took a bunch of pictures and some video of downtown Portland. This video was taken in a Starbucks. We plan do use this background and the other pictures occasionally in our Nick and Will cartoons.
Re: Coffee House Conversation
Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2014 4:01 pm
by lwaxana
The live action background is a cool concept and it's working well in the short. But I didn't get the joke at first. Maybe when the guy is explaining what the towel is like, an image of the new towel he received could show on the screen so the audience is clear on what the towel is. That might set up the joke better.
Re: Coffee House Conversation
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:07 am
by jahnocli
lwaxana wrote:The live action background is a cool concept and it's working well in the short. But I didn't get the joke at first. Maybe when the guy is explaining what the towel is like, an image of the new towel he received could show on the screen so the audience is clear on what the towel is. That might set up the joke better.
No, I think that would slow it down unnecessarily and send a telegram about the ending. (Do people still send telegrams? Memo to self: jack in to that information superhighway thingy...)
Re: Coffee House Conversation
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2014 2:01 pm
by Danimal
jahnocli wrote:Do people still send telegrams?
It's worse that that, as generally that expression would be to "telegraph" the ending, and no one's used a telegraph since the 1800s or so.
The joke was only OK, but it still made me laugh thanks to the gratuitous laugh track and rimshot. The animation was great as well, good blending of elements.
Re: Coffee House Conversation
Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:13 am
by ekrunk
Man, this looks really weird. I like it a lot. Is there a way to develop Close Ups on the characters without distorting the live-video too much?
I guess I could have shown Will's towel so people had a better idea of what it was. Sometimes it's hard not to assume people know what you are talking about.
ekrunk wrote:Man, this looks really weird. I like it a lot. Is there a way to develop Close Ups on the characters without distorting the live-video too much?