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another animation practice for my cartoon..the animation is still a little too fast and stiff ..hopefully i will get to good 2d animation level soon
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1lyTJF ... e=youtu.be

Welcome to the forum. You're pretty good already. When they saw the alien their pupils constricted. Nice touch!

This is well animated, but even more to the point it's actually a very well done trailer overall! It gives a taste of the story but stops just short of giving away too much, giving a sense of curiosity about what happens next. You should give Hollywood a call and let them know you'll do all trailers from now on because THIS is the right way.

Looking forward to more!

3deeguy wrote:Welcome to the forum. You're pretty good already. When they saw the alien their pupils constricted. Nice touch!

thank you

Danimal wrote:This is well animated, but even more to the point it's actually a very well done trailer overall! It gives a taste of the story but stops just short of giving away too much, giving a sense of curiosity about what happens next. You should give Hollywood a call and let them know you'll do all trailers from now on because THIS is the right way.

Looking forward to more!

thank you ..i am aiming for cartoon network or Nick that's why i have to be at their animator's level ...cuz animation is my only gate to them lol

Cool project! I love the scene where they put the helmets on the astronauts. I think subtle background colors like you used in that scene would work well for the space shuttle backgrounds, too, especially if you're going for a cartoon network or nick look. Can't wait to see it with the sound effects and dialogue. I think that will really add to the experience. Looking forward to seeing more. :D

This is a well made trailer. I couldn't have chosen a better soundtrack for it...its really fitting for a space themed animation. I'm looking forward to how this comes out =)