crackhead in a diaper boots jenkum junky in the face.
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 4:19 am
by sargumphigaus
exactly how it sounds.
Re: crackhead in a diaper boots jenkum junky in the face.
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 5:59 am
by ddrake
Lovely. Graceful yet choppy in all the right ways. Exactly like watching a bad-trip nightmare ballet.
Nice work of exaggerated foreshortening on the foot as it swings around. I could almost smell it.
Not sure if "Crackhead in diaper" is the hero of your tale, but certainly a sympathetic anti-hero. The "Junkies getting pwned" trope is underused and one that never grows stale in my opinion. Can't wait for the full dance to be revealed.
Re: crackhead in a diaper boots jenkum junky in the face.
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:36 pm
by Danimal
sargumphigaus wrote:crackhead in a diaper boots jenkum junky in the face.
You should be more clear in your description, I didn't know what to expect.
No really, it looks good, if not a bit confusing.
Re: crackhead in a diaper boots jenkum junky in the face.
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:49 pm
by sargumphigaus
Danimal wrote:if not a bit confusing.
I feel that it came out very confusing. I probably shouldn't have posted it. Especially when it's still in such an alpha stage...
It does blend in to the background (or there in lack of) there's not enough contrast, so the boss character (diaper guy) isn't 100 % clear. As for the guy getting kicked, I ran out of time and had to rush it. He doesn't react nearly as well as he needs to. And I may just do away with the shakey camera all together. There's plenty going, and I think that the camera movement obscures what's really going on too much.
Now, as soon as I get over this anxiety attack i'm currently having, I'll be make it a point to try and do that.
