Peta Saves a Mouse

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HanglideProductions
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Peta Saves a Mouse

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so i made a facebook page making fun of peta one day 2 years ago when peta made a video game depicting pokemon as slave death fighting creatures which made me upset and i just let it sit and long story short 2 years later all of the sudden the page gets 800+ likes and i think to myself ok ill make a cartoon making fun of peta thats an automatic audience of over 800 people....one person liked it so ya i don't know what the hell i was thinking but here it is anyways and warning there is some explicit language and adult situations
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So much goodness going on in here, and it all starts with the very first line. The cursing killed it but I stuck with it and it improved. Nice job!
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Danimal wrote:So much goodness going on in here, and it all starts with the very first line. The cursing killed it but I stuck with it and it improved. Nice job!
thanks! ya I tried not to use too much cursing, but I feel like the times where there was it was needed to emphasize the emotions of the peta characters because they are known for being very passionate plus I really like the F word honestly, though I understand many people aren't a fan of fowl language
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HanglideProductions wrote:many people aren't a fan of fowl language
Like when ducks quack? But seriously folks...

It's not foul language, it's gratuitous foul language that should never be used. Also, it's possible to convey passion without swearing. Acting trumps words every time.

Still, an excellent piece. It deserved more than one like. Maybe even as many as four.
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Tell me how you came up the ads like "Baby Meat" and "Apocalypse Taco! :)
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lol...baby meat. wtf
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3deeguy wrote:Tell me how you came up the ads like "Baby Meat" and "Apocalypse Taco! :)
honestly i have no idea me and my friend just kept pitching fake meat sponsors back and forth to each other and that was one of them, we would record the ones we liked, and we were completely sober too if you think those sounded like we were high or something when we thought of them haha
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