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Toilet cartoon
Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 8:37 pm
by Rubendg
So here is the fifth cartoon of Loery Potpie. This time, he and his wife are fighting about the bathroom. I'm proud to say that I got it finished within two weeks. I've decided to put more time in it because I got so much ideas right now. So hopefully, I will be able to release a new cartoon within two weeks. Hope you like it. Enjoy!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WBJOS1KaiqI
Re: Toilet cartoon
Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 1:43 pm
by Danimal
Rubendg wrote:So hopefully, I will be able to release a new cartoon within two weeks
Hopefully indeed, these are great! When the wife opens the door, I burst out laughing. Finally, "toilet humor" done right!
If I had one critique, it would be that since the title of the episode is "Loery is in the Bathroom," it spoils the first joke where he talks about how he's in the best place on Earth. Otherwise, great stuff as always!
Re: Toilet cartoon
Posted: Wed Apr 08, 2015 5:52 pm
by Rubendg
Danimal wrote:Rubendg wrote:So hopefully, I will be able to release a new cartoon within two weeks
Hopefully indeed, these are great! When the wife opens the door, I burst out laughing. Finally, "toilet humor" done right!
If I had one critique, it would be that since the title of the episode is "Loery is in the Bathroom," it spoils the first joke where he talks about how he's in the best place on Earth. Otherwise, great stuff as always!
Thanks for the feedback!