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Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 10:55 am
by Jitendas.10
Here is the link of my short film...
All tne positive and negative comments are wel come..
https://youtu.be/CuR_zdMwCGY
Regards
Jiten
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:48 am
by tobbog
Hello Jiten,
it looks really great, I love the use of blur especially!
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 4:09 pm
by rafael
Nice work!
Suggestion: Instead of "zooming" into to reframe your shots, rely more on hard cuts, like they would do in a movie/cartoon/TV. It'll give it a more professional feel. If you do decide to push-in, make sure it is motivated by the content. An example of this would be a character discovering something important and pushing into a close-up to show the reaction. Or slowly pushing in while a character is lost in thought.
I think you did a great job on this and chose a really suitable story. Excited to see what you do next!
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 6:35 pm
by Jitendas.10
Thank you Tobbg for loving my work
And thank you for your tips rafael, i ll follow it....
Regards
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2018 11:03 am
by chucky
Nice to see a full story, simple but effective.
Good advice from Raphael too.
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2018 7:01 am
by Jitendas.10
Thank u chucky
Will try to improve in my next film.
Regards
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Sun Dec 09, 2018 5:29 am
by Little Yamori
A very pleasant story
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2018 6:34 am
by Jitendas.10
Little Yamori
Thank you vry much.