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need some feedback!!

Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 9:18 pm
by blackspittle
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Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 11:00 pm
by jahnocli
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Posted: Fri Feb 02, 2007 12:37 am
by Genete
Perhaps you should give more contrast to the monkey colors. It is difficult to see the eyes and the expresions.
Also your drawings need some improvement unless it want to reproduce the original drawings.
Music is excelent.!!!
Let's continue practicing...

Cheers!!!!

Genete

Posted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 10:11 am
by lordstok
nice!
simple and easy to understand

although i think you could work on the water flow. the water completely appears from nowhere and then dissapears in 1 frame. I thought it was a mountain or something at first!!

a simple improvement would be to have the water peak out from the faucet first (single frame or more) and then have a shimmer/flow on the water while it is out (alternating frames with different ripple). That should clear up any confusion

nice work! music was ace
JULIAN