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Cat throwing ball

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:31 am
by ali980
1. At frame 1, the drawing quality is good.
2. The animation quality is not good, it need a bit, too much tuning.
3. Once the animation finished, I'll update.

http://www.mediafire.com/?dcym4si0zzk

Let me know what you think.

Re: Cat throwing ball

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:36 am
by ali980
Btw, feel free to use the anme file.

Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:49 am
by Genete
Overall drawing very good.

TIPS:
Use "Off Set bone" tool instead of move the bones at frame 1. It would let you use the "Manipulate bones" tool at frame 0. (You can not use it with your current file)

Place the "R leg" behind the "L hand" layer. At one moment the hand is behind its leg. Also need a rearrange of the layer order and name to be consistent (left should be left for all the limbs...)

Good work

-G

Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:05 am
by ali980
Thank you Genete,

- Offset bone tool is used.
- R log and L hand are corrected.
- Left and Right are renamed correctly.
- Removed Head group and made it only one layer for easy bone moving.
- Still animation needs a lot tuning.

http://www.mediafire.com/?dy5yjgjvwys

I will stop here, because currently I am concentrating on drawing in AS, once I am good there I'll concentrate on animation, background, sounds, story, ... , complete film or series.