This looks great, I love the character designs. Nice work on the background music as well.

Thanks Henton, I agree, I was going for an awkwardness between the doctor and the assistance. It just didn't work well for me, it just dragged in the final edit. And yeah...I work in a pharmacy, so I'm well aware of the IV aspect. That's actually part of the reason why I found it (300cc) so disturbi...

It looks great. One thing I think may help is to add some outdoor sounds. Birds, cars....that type of thing. The voice over comes in kind of abruptly and the absence of sound is a little odd in some parts. Nice video, I really like the drawing of the old man.

Thanks for the pdf link. It looks interesting. The switch layer is working out pretty well. I've got a lot of drawing ahead of me.

I'll try that as well Little Yamori.

Thanks

I like it. I love the eyes. The only thing that stands out as a little off to me is the hair and the shorts. The hair line looks a little busy, the 2nd layer beneath the top is the first thing that caught my attention. And, the shorts kind of looks a little like he has an erection. Not a lot, just t...

Sargumphigaus, I thought there would be issue doing the turn with switch layering for some reason. I thought that I may have issues with bone movement or the eyes and mouth switches if I made the head a switch layer. I'll give that a try tonight. The body turn video is interesting, I'll have to try ...

I'm not pissed off about anything. I'm fine with what Danimal said about the cartoon, I never really expected anyone on the forum to like it and I seen his cartoons...didn't care for them anymore than he cares for mine. Not making a judgement on the animation, as I have no grounds to do that, But, t...

I'm fine with critical honesty. I just think the way with which he delivered said honesty was oddly aggressive, and, there was no reason for that. I really couldn't care less if people like the writing. I just wanted some feedback on the drawings and animation. Last time a few people gave me some gr...

Jesus, what is wrong with you? I'm sorry you wasted your time, but, I really don't understand why you feel the need to attack something that I innocently posted to get a little feedback on.

Fair enough. Danimal, I did say there was a lot of unnecessary swearing specifically for your benefit.

I finished this a few weeks ago, it's the first proper episode of a cartoon I posted here a few months ago. I appreciate the tips from the first post, especially from Lumpy who pointed out that I needed to blur the backgrounds a bit. Thanks, that helped a lot. Fair warning, still a lot of unnecessar...

Danimal, I didn't mean any disrespect to the board. I like this forum. But, I've noticed a good bit of feedback and critique posts focus way too much on the choice of language. This just isn't the place to post videos like this. PeverallVibes, I think using a quality microphone would help your overa...

PeverallVibes, this board is fairly conservative. It's a great resource for software tips and techniques. But, I really don't think you will find an audience for your video here.

Nice animation. It worked really well with that song.

Nice work on the video. But, your cartoon is very insensitive to those of us who have been unwittingly sodomized in an A&F. I'm just saying...think about the victims.