Finally finished scene two "The Hostile Servant" for Eve of October. Just needs background music, maybe some more SFX. Hope you all like Laura Post, and Kieran's voice work. I thought it turned out pretty good. Marzout!
Awesome new scene! It's always exciting to see the latest on your project.
One suggestion. Right after Mackell says "regardless of your political ramblings" it zooms in on the Tupaul before he yells and slaps her. I would suggest cutting that zoom and going straight into the action, because it seems like he's reacting in the heat of the moment. But then there's a pause before he does it causing a bit of disconnect.
lwaxana wrote:Awesome new scene! It's always exciting to see the latest on your project.
One suggestion. Right after Mackell says "regardless of your political ramblings" it zooms in on the Tupaul before he yells and slaps her. I would suggest cutting that zoom and going straight into the action, because it seems like he's reacting in the heat of the moment. But then there's a pause before he does it causing a bit of disconnect.
Yeah I was worried about that. I may fix that. I was trying to amp up the intensity.
New Rigg setup
By the way I am now just waiting for Laura Posts lines on the next scene. Pretty much things are on schedule. I dont have any animations right now to show anyone, but here is the Eve rigging and background for the next scene. I have other backgrounds as well for the variety of the scene. One of the problems im running into, is that I would like to have more dynamic backgrounds. Its hard changing angles (in the background) when dealing with a 3 Quarter Rig of the character. I obviously need to work this out. Anyhow here is the picture.
Test Scene
Well here is just a little test scene. very brief, Im just working out little ideas. Unfortunately my lead Voice actor is very busy, and I havent gotten any lines yet for this scene... So Im just trying to do other things till the lines arrive. I guess its a good idea to kinda work these things out anyhow, but I sure like to have everything there cuz it really motivates me.
Here is the latest scene from Eve of October. I need a transitional piece at the end, but this is pretty much it. Oh, still working out background music too. Hope you all like what you see.
Danimal wrote:Here's hoping I don't misspell any basic words this time around.
That is an excellent update. Are you combining images and vectors? That looks so incredibly good!
Basically its all straight art, scanned in. If you mean vectored lines, well, If I had the patience to build my riggs that way, I probably should have. I just cant turn loose from a pen. The church Im pretty proud of. It's a photo turned to art. The front view I actually carefully pieced together, using skew tool to build it into 3D. Most of my backgrounds are Photos to Art. Some are scratch, it just depends on what works for the scene. Thanks again, Mars out
Yes, Its a New Scene
Finally finished "The Alpha". This scene was added in to help explain Eve's past. After test screening the past scenes, there seemed to be some confusion about why Eve was in a wheelchair. I had planned on doing this in a prequel episode, but it appeared that it needed to be addressed "at least a little". I plan on placing this at the very begining, like right before the title sequence. Anyhow the voice work of my new voice actor "Shock Dingo" is nothing short of amazing. Of course I would be crazy not to mention "Laura Post" as well. They both have done amazing work. Hope you all enjoy. Mars out!
