Character Design

Want to share your Moho work? Post it here.

Moderators: Víctor Paredes, Belgarath, slowtiger

User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

[edit: image removed]

Hi Jez,
Thanks so much for your suggestions! I implemented them on one of the characters and I think she looks a lot better. Can't wait to get to work on the others. I really appreciate your insights. And the visual helped me to understand what you meant. The only point I'm confused on is the location of nowhere land. :D Should I be avoiding placing the pupils in the center of the eye or touching the edges? Or just anything that looks unfocused? Your drawings gave the impression that they should be touching the edges. Is that correct? Thanks again!

----

Mikdog--I think I like the original collar best myself. Maybe the mandarin collar can be his formal wear. hehe.

I couldn't figure out what was going on with the neck in that test! lol I later realized that it was because I put the entire head and neck in a switch layer so the point binding was lost. So I separated out the neck, face, bangs, and hair. I was dreading doing that for a long time. Especially after I had put a head on each phoneme layer. But it was definitely worth it. Now I can try some point animation actions for the hair moving. bwahaha.

Anyway, I point binded(bound?) the neck and now it has some flex to it, although I don't think I showed that in this test: http://vimeo.com/10440019

-----

Slowtiger--Thanks, I really notice that proper gestures would make a difference. I don't suppose you have any book recommendations for animating gestures and body language?

----

Sbtamu--Thanks! I like that idea a lot. In an angry expression, I think the harsh feeling of the eyebrows could add a lot to the scene. :)
Last edited by lwaxana on Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
slowtiger
Posts: 6237
Joined: Thu Feb 16, 2006 6:53 pm
Location: Berlin, Germany
Contact:

Post by slowtiger »

There's no special book about that I'm aware of.

Instead I recommend to just study footage from actors and other people. This will also solve your eye problem: just get some video of a child telling some story into the camera and notice how it will look down, up again, into the camera, sideways to some parent, and so on. Just one single scene will give you enough fodder for all your scenes.

Also have a look for footage from old sitcoms: the kind where the actors were still allowed to move their faces. Make screengrabs from interesting poses/faces. And then sit down and do those faces with your character - all of them!
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Image
I really thought I was done fiddling with this character design, but the feeling from my old concept drawings was missing. This new version is much closer...
User avatar
knunk
Posts: 153
Joined: Thu Aug 05, 2004 7:18 am

Post by knunk »

Totally bang on Iwaxana! Shes alive.
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Thanks, knunk! :D And thanks again for your pointers.
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Image

This is where I am at the moment. The poor punk kid's face is all wrong and I can't figure out why. We've never had a solid 3/4 view drawing of him so I'm making it up with reference to the front view. If someone can spot what's wrong, I'd love to know! Any other suggestions?
sbtamu
Posts: 1915
Joined: Tue Dec 15, 2009 5:05 am
Location: Texas
Contact:

Post by sbtamu »

The legs and feet look fine, but the body still looks frontal, the head is good but the right eye might need to move more to the left. And make the shoulder on the left slope up and shorter and the one on right slope down.
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Image

Thanks, sbtamu! Is this what you mean about the shoulders?
User avatar
GCharb
Posts: 2270
Joined: Mon Oct 10, 2005 2:31 am
Location: Montreal, Quebec, Canada
Contact:

Post by GCharb »

Whoa, just saw that thread, nice work lwaxana, I really like the way those evolved, they look great.

Seems you we're in good hands too :)

Too late for me to add to the mix but I would like to share a link to an online version of my all time favorite animation book, this is what got me started 30+ years ago, a super classic, just in case you do not have it already :)

Plenty of tricks and guidelines for character creation there and I still believe you can find some used ones on Amazon.

I still posess some I bought as a teenager, memory lane, sigh! :)

Preston Blair Advanced Animation

G
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Thanks GCharb! I didn't realize that Preston Blair had a book on advanced animation. That link will definitely come in handy. Do you actually have the first edition with the copyrighted characters?

When you mentioned the evolution of the characters, I was compelled to go back and look at some of the really old drawings of them. They're probably 8 years old now. :-\ Here's an example, just for fun. :D
Image

------

I think I'm almost done with these character designs. There are just a couple of things I want to work out. I have two different hair options for the girl. One is flat on the top and the other is rounded. The rounded looks right when I'm looking at her hair, but the flat looks better to me when I'm looking at her eyes. I also might adjust some of the colors. And I'm still open to suggestions. :D

Image
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Image

Okay, the neck issue keeps coming up so I'm going to try to get this figured out once and for all! :D Here are some comparisons. Thanks Neomarz for the barbie neck suggestion! One thing I like about the barbie necks is that I moved the head more to the center and the head doesn't look so far forward. It seems to work best on the girl character. But it also makes the characters look more delicate, which is not really what I'm going for. Maybe some compromise between the current neck and the barbie neck...

I'm not liking the curved collars. The curve breaks up the line of the body too much which seems to water down the style. And it also looks like their necks are being constricted by their collars.

So maybe the weird neck/shoulders/head issue is mostly about the placement of the neck at the base of the head and how centered the head is on the body? Any opinions or suggestions on this?
gleeful
Posts: 62
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2009 9:12 pm
Location: California

Post by gleeful »

I am very impressed with your amazing attention to detail throughout the character development process.

My immediate reaction to the un-curved collars, regardless of the head/neck relationship is that the head is on backwards. A slight curve in a collar usually describes the volume of the figure's torso. Because that curve is missing in the straight-collar figures, they all appear stiffer and flatter to my eye.

That observation aside, you are the only one who knows what the look and feel of your project needs to be. I look forward to seeing how your project and your characters evolve.

Once again I am very impressed with the care you are giving to your project. Makes me feel lazy and inspires me to improve my own character development process. As a real new-comer to animation, I have so much to learn. I appreciate all your contributions to the forum.
What if?
User avatar
Mikdog
Posts: 1901
Joined: Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:51 pm
Location: South Africa
Contact:

Post by Mikdog »

1. b
2. d
3. b
User avatar
DrToad
Posts: 2
Joined: Thu Apr 01, 2010 3:44 pm
Location: Tailien

Post by DrToad »

Radio is the transmission of signals by modulation of electromagnetic waves with frequencies below those of visible light.[1] Electromagnetic radiation travels by means of oscillating electromagnetic fields that pass through the air and the vacuum of space. Information is carried by systematically changing (modulating) some property of the radiated waves, such as amplitude, frequency, phase, or pulse width. When radio waves pass an electrical conductor, the oscillating fields induce an alternating current in the conductor. This can be detected and transformed into sound or other signals that carry information.

Sample Stations:
#
http://www.amandaschoolfield.com/dogs-radio/

# http://www.dogcastradio.com/
User avatar
lwaxana
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Jan 06, 2010 6:50 pm

Post by lwaxana »

Image

Mikdog and Gleeful--Hmm... I thought that image was incontrovertible proof that a curved collar looked bad. :D But I experimented some more and I'm liking this tunic collar for the girl. The red shirt collar looks okay to me with a plain curve. I'm still working on the green one, though.

-----

Gleeful--Aw, thanks very much! :D I'm a newcomer to animation too, which I think is why this is taking me so long! But I am really amazed how much getting feedback from this forum has made me stretch. With everyone's input, these designs are becoming way better than I imagined them. I have never experienced that before. It's pretty amazing.
Post Reply