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After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part 1

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:26 am
by jessica951
Visit my blog! http://bothecreature.wordpress.com
Any comments are welcome :D

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:07 am
by Pinesal
Its very good. I like the art especially the backgrounds.

I am confused. This is a trailer? So you have a larger animation project that this was cut from? Or this animation is a fake trailer for a cartoon that doesn't really exist?

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:33 am
by jessica951
Pinesal wrote:Its very good. I like the art especially the backgrounds.

I am confused. This is a trailer? So you have a larger animation project that this was cut from? Or this animation is a fake trailer for a cartoon that doesn't really exist?
It's one of the main character's trailer from my cartoon. This is only the first part of the episode. I am still working to complete it. And thank you! I worked a long time on the backgrounds actually.

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:01 am
by AmigaMan
I agree with Pinesal, the backgrounds are excellent. The animation and camera moves and the way the shots are set up are also very well done. A great full body turn at the end too I noticed :D Have to mention the music and narration also which enhance perfectly. Great work!

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:46 am
by jessica951
AmigaMan wrote:I agree with Pinesal, the backgrounds are excellent. The animation and camera moves and the way the shots are set up are also very well done. A great full body turn at the end too I noticed :D Have to mention the music and narration also which enhance perfectly. Great work!
Thank you so much for your kind words! It was your videos actually that first inspired me to create turns in AS :D

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 1:30 pm
by AmigaMan
I was being honest, it'sgreat. Thanks for saying that Jessica. It means a lot and made my day :D

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:02 pm
by aleXean
I felt as if the shots were too fast and the camera movements were too much/too janky. Slow the camera down so we can see that character animation! Which was very close to being spot on!

Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part

Posted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 2:47 am
by jessica951
aleXean wrote:I felt as if the shots were too fast and the camera movements were too much/too janky. Slow the camera down so we can see that character animation! Which was very close to being spot on!
Next part will not be as fast.