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After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part 1
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Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
Its very good. I like the art especially the backgrounds.
I am confused. This is a trailer? So you have a larger animation project that this was cut from? Or this animation is a fake trailer for a cartoon that doesn't really exist?
I am confused. This is a trailer? So you have a larger animation project that this was cut from? Or this animation is a fake trailer for a cartoon that doesn't really exist?
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Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
It's one of the main character's trailer from my cartoon. This is only the first part of the episode. I am still working to complete it. And thank you! I worked a long time on the backgrounds actually.Pinesal wrote:Its very good. I like the art especially the backgrounds.
I am confused. This is a trailer? So you have a larger animation project that this was cut from? Or this animation is a fake trailer for a cartoon that doesn't really exist?
Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
I agree with Pinesal, the backgrounds are excellent. The animation and camera moves and the way the shots are set up are also very well done. A great full body turn at the end too I noticed Have to mention the music and narration also which enhance perfectly. Great work!
Have to mention the music and narration also which enhance perfectly. Great work!-
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Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
Thank you so much for your kind words! It was your videos actually that first inspired me to create turns in ASAmigaMan wrote:I agree with Pinesal, the backgrounds are excellent. The animation and camera moves and the way the shots are set up are also very well done. A great full body turn at the end too I noticed
Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
I was being honest, it'sgreat. Thanks for saying that Jessica. It means a lot and made my day
Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
I felt as if the shots were too fast and the camera movements were too much/too janky. Slow the camera down so we can see that character animation! Which was very close to being spot on!
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Re: After 5 months of work, I give you Bo the Creature part
Next part will not be as fast.aleXean wrote:I felt as if the shots were too fast and the camera movements were too much/too janky. Slow the camera down so we can see that character animation! Which was very close to being spot on!