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Rob Broek · Post by **Rob Broek** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:56 am

My first animation picture with Anime Pro is ready

http://youtu.be/c-idSmdHD08

jonbo · Post by **jonbo** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 2:48 pm

It's interesting Rob but you should put a adult content warning to avoid offending

Rob Broek · Post by **Rob Broek** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 3:17 pm

I'm sorry. Was not aware of that. Buth how can I put that warning?

jonbo · Post by **jonbo** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 3:32 pm

You could put the warning in the thread before your link or put the disclaimer at the beginning of the video to give people who don't want to see that type of stuff the chance to stop watching. There's nothing IMO that's really bad in the video and it's all in context to the story, but there are younger forum members here who might not want to see this.

ruscular3d · Post by **ruscular3d** » Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:02 pm

This was a huge task for a first film. I think the story line was interesting.

I think timing could have been shorter for many of the scene to allow the story to flow smoother. I think each scene was drawn out too long to the point that it became over dramatic to the point that the story was losing my attention.

It does remind me of the marijuana hyper madness film of how the drugs eventually lead a person to murder. In this case her vanity lead her to the dark alley of lurid lifestyle.