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Good Afternoon! • Short Cartoon Series Produced in AS

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Good Afternoon!

All the big networks have news programs in the mornings and in the evenings, but not in the afternoon. This new series will show you exactly why that is...

A new episode will be added every month.

This is my second original series. The overall quality is noticeably better than my first. Professional voice acting probably had the biggest impact in that respect, but I like to think my own skills have improved a little as well. :)

I drew and animated everything in Anime Studio with my Wacom Intuos tablet. The final sequencing, music, and ambient sounds were done in Final Cut.
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Yes it's a great improvement I thought with great artwork. Maybe the editing could be tightened up slightly but that's all I could spot. It's very professional otherwise.
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Thanks for your feedback, AmigaMan. :)
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It's been a few months since I've dropped by this forum, and some new episodes have been posted since then. :)
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Glad you posted a reminder - this is a very well animated series and a good story!
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Another month means another episode!

After one child’s violent outburst, angry parents rally to assign maturity ratings to carnival games... :)

http://gfcmedia.net/good-afternoon/carn ... y-ratings/
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It's ok, the drawings are good but it seems like the characters are barely animated. Also the pacing is too slow.

Good effort.
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Pinesal wrote:Good effort.
Thanks for your feedback. I wasn't really sure what to do with that last one since it was mostly short cuts of people being interviewed. I think you'll find the next episode to be a better effort. ;)

In this month's episode, Mitch shares a slightly misguided pep-talk about viewership ratings.
http://gfcmedia.net/good-afternoon/ratings/
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Still looks good and the writing continues to be well paced. Nice job!
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Thanks for your kind words. :)
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