Nick and Will and Beans

[Pinesal]

Admittedly, it has pacing issues. I hope you enjoy it anyway! Please critique.

[jahnocli]

Ah, who doesn't love a fart joke? But yeah, the pacing was the main problem. It was a one-shot gag that took 3 minutes to tell -- that's way too long. Eating the beans out of the cans stopped being funny straight away. Maybe Nick (wannabe farter?) could have tried to disguise the impending fart in a variety of ways? Maybe the beans could have been revealed later on after Nick had practically given himself a hernia trying to fart. Maybe the gag reveal could have been that Will had a heavy cold and couldn't smell anything anyway. Dunno. It needed a lot more creative input though.

[Pinesal]

Thanks for the awesome and thought out comments. This is very helpful as these shorts are just things that made us giggle thinking of it and practice for a much larger project to come.

[Danimal]

My favorite part was the subtitle "a rumbly in his tummy." I like this animation style and the backgrounds are great. This is a really fun cartoon to watch!