New Animated Comedy Series - Thoughts/Opinions Wanted

[HangmanSi]

Both the whiskers and the stubble were painstakingly drawn.

And I'd never heard of Odd Job Jack until just googling it. I can see some resemblance. Is it an American show?

[jahnocli]

...I'd never heard of Odd Job Jack until just googling it. I can see some resemblance. Is it an American show?

Yes. Smiley Guy studios (Canadian company) made it for the American market. If you have bitTorrent or similar, they made all the artwork from series 1 freely available.

[Artpen]

I liked the characters, keep going with it, the facial animation is good also, well done!

[AmigaMan]

I enjoyed this new improved version. Yes, it looks great and I would watch this. It made me feel a bit homesick actually, hearing those Midland accents

[HangmanSi]

Part III

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lsT1Vbxo9MY

[sbtamu]

As an American I could see this happening to me watching the Dallas Cowboys and it has actually happened lol. I like your idea on this.

The suggestions I am making require many hrs of doing but I think you have something worth improving.

I would make 3/4 views of the characters to go along with what you have already, either with smart bones or a switch layers.

I would show the character walking if you are going to show them up to the knees, if not try not showing the characters below the waist when they are moving/walking.

Stephen

[HangmanSi]

Thanks for the advice.

[SvenReyter]

I liked it. I'm new to animation. But, I thought the art looked great. You did a nice job with the audio as well. I've watched a bunch of videos posted here and this has been one of the most entertaining. It has the look and feel of a proper series. No clue why people are complaining about the writing and the language. I guess it's not a show for everyone, but, I enjoyed it.