another animation practice for my cartoon..the animation is still a little too fast and stiff ..hopefully i will get to good 2d animation level soon
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1lyTJF ... e=youtu.be
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Welcome to the forum. You're pretty good already. When they saw the alien their pupils constricted. Nice touch!
Cheers, Larry
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This is well animated, but even more to the point it's actually a very well done trailer overall! It gives a taste of the story but stops just short of giving away too much, giving a sense of curiosity about what happens next. You should give Hollywood a call and let them know you'll do all trailers from now on because THIS is the right way.
Looking forward to more!
Looking forward to more!
~Danimal
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thank you3deeguy wrote:Welcome to the forum. You're pretty good already. When they saw the alien their pupils constricted. Nice touch!

thank you ..i am aiming for cartoon network or Nick that's why i have to be at their animator's level ...cuz animation is my only gate to them lolDanimal wrote:This is well animated, but even more to the point it's actually a very well done trailer overall! It gives a taste of the story but stops just short of giving away too much, giving a sense of curiosity about what happens next. You should give Hollywood a call and let them know you'll do all trailers from now on because THIS is the right way.
Looking forward to more!
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Cool project! I love the scene where they put the helmets on the astronauts. I think subtle background colors like you used in that scene would work well for the space shuttle backgrounds, too, especially if you're going for a cartoon network or nick look. Can't wait to see it with the sound effects and dialogue. I think that will really add to the experience. Looking forward to seeing more. :D
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This is a well made trailer. I couldn't have chosen a better soundtrack for it...its really fitting for a space themed animation. I'm looking forward to how this comes out =)