Some criticism on my animation

kooobus · Post by **kooobus** » Wed Apr 27, 2016 11:41 am

Hello,

Would like to share with you my first animation done in anime studio. Hope you will like it and give me some criticism

Here it is
https://youtu.be/KWFIQYQKl6E

Cheers!

jezjones29 · Post by **jezjones29** » Wed Apr 27, 2016 10:55 pm

I liked it. Maybe make him blink? Would be good to see some more motion in his hair when he moves too.

kooobus · Post by **kooobus** » Thu Apr 28, 2016 9:19 am

I am glad to hear that you liked it

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Hmm additional movements sounds like good idea. I just wanted to ask if it's clear that second character is tube infalable man.

jezjones29 · Post by **jezjones29** » Thu Apr 28, 2016 9:53 am

I think it's obvious, but he really needs a few more bones to make him look correct - he looks a little stiff.
Watch this cool vid from Víctor Paredes to see how to rig him:
viewtopic.php?t=15647

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Thu Apr 28, 2016 2:11 pm

Some interaction between the two would be more engaging (eg, the guy imitating some of the inflatable's movements).

kooobus · Post by **kooobus** » Thu Apr 28, 2016 10:01 pm

Actually I didn't think about that. It seems to be a good idea. I wanted a middle part to emphasize interaction between boy and inflatable man. Thanks for your feedback

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