Bad Red Ballon

[kooobus]

Hello there fellow animators!

I just wanted to share my latest animation done in AS. It's nothing special, just random idea that came to my mind. I am beginner so I would like to hear some meaningful criticisms from you. You are probably more experienced then I'm and this is why I like to know what is your opinion.



Cheers!

[funksmaname]

Nice characters/style, I think it's a good job! only thing I spotted was a little slide in the walk cycle...

[Fuzatron]

That's a great little animation! Really like how you gave it a lot of style too

[jahnocli]

Nicely done. I liked the introduction of the bully, and the overall style too.

[kooobus]

Thank you for reply. I really appreciate your opinion and this is really important to me. For now I'd like to focus on these little projects to practise basics of animation.

Cheers!

[exobunker]

a good (bad ?) surprise.

[kooobus]

a good (bad ?) surprise.

I guess you liked it
Any other thoughts about this animation?

[picapau]

like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.

[kooobus]

like it! your style is consistent ... yeah there was a tiny bit of sliding in the boys walk-cycle ... perhaps you could insert a bit of mimic in the close-up of the boys face ... the camera movement from the big guys t-shirt up to his face was a great idea ... well done man.

Thank you picapau
Yeah I noticed that slide when it was too late to correct it. Still I need to practise more on those little things.
Talking about bullys character, I tried to introduce him in original way and use skull on his shirt to create a suspense.

Cheers!