My first Moho Music Video

TJ · Post by TJ » Sat Feb 04, 2006 2:27 am

This is my first attempt at a moho animation. It is an animation to the song "Tattva" by Kula Shaker.

It still leaves a lot to be desired for, but I ran out of steam for a while so I thought I'd put it up for comments.

Tattva

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 9:50 am

The intro is very good. However, I must have a short attention span or something -- I just got bored, and turned it off halfway through. Needs to be more happening for me...

gavi dvan · Post by **gavi dvan** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:04 am

EDIT-wrong thread!

TJ · Post by TJ » Sat Feb 04, 2006 3:03 pm

Thank you for the input.

I agree there needs to be more action involved in the video.

When I first created the animation, it was simply a talking head lip synching to the song. Then I came upon the idea of him taking an astral projection journey.. then a bit later came the idea for the intro to the jungle clearing. So, there was a lot of revisiting the idea over-and-over while still developing.

Does anyone have any suggestions for future projects on a good method to brainstorm/storyboard long before the project is actually started? I'm having a hard time visualizing a project from beginning to end.

Thanks again
TJ

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 5:09 pm

Google for "microfiction"; it's an approach which is a bit formulaic, but I use it occasionally; can be a good help in lashing up a quick short story sometimes...

rpc9943 · Post by **rpc9943** » Sun Feb 05, 2006 6:55 am

i love this band but yes, if the character wasnt so strange looking and us staring at him every single frame, it would be far more engaging. Or if it just showed his face, with a detached look like a radiohead music video or something....

you had some cool ideas but it just isnt cutting it with that guy imho.

RonC