my first copmpleted work in moho (2d motion graphics promo)

[ignoramus]

[Maestral]

Ето так круто! Браво!

[PARKER]

This is awesome.

[GCharb]

Loved it, great tempo, very professional!

[rafael]

Really nice work! I've been curious how it would be doing a project like this in Moho instead of AE.

[slowtiger]

Really good work! Maybe there's a bit too much going on, it pays to be more economical with effects. I especially like the colour change of the package going under water.

Tip: if you do a squash&stretch on elements, always consider the center of mass and how rigid they are. A very simple but effective way is to set the point of origin to the object's bottom line, so all deformation centers around that.

[chucky]

Very good.
Yes the approach to shading could be a little more consistent.
For eaxmple the last shot.
THe reflection was very elaborate but in going down that route it ended up looking weird, especially as it is actually neither a reflection or a shadow.
SO to be a reflection of the floor, it should not have shear on it, the reflection would be perpendicular to the surface that reflects it.
In this case a flat floor would be ninety degrees, a perfect mirror, maybe with a opacity fade and blur as it gets lower.
WHat you have looks more like a shadow with an image on it.

If you wanted just a shadow then that layer should have the tint colour or masked colour to obscure the image.
You could do both, but in this motion graphic style, less is best and consistency even more crucial.

I love what you have done and I think you have a great future based on this piece, it just could be paired back to give a cleaner finish.
Well done, ignoramus.

[Little Yamori]

very cool!