Short film...... MOLAI

[Jitendas.10]

Here is the link of my short film...
All tne positive and negative comments are wel come..

https://youtu.be/CuR_zdMwCGY


Regards
Jiten

[tobbog]

Hello Jiten,

it looks really great, I love the use of blur especially!

[rafael]

Nice work!

Suggestion: Instead of "zooming" into to reframe your shots, rely more on hard cuts, like they would do in a movie/cartoon/TV. It'll give it a more professional feel. If you do decide to push-in, make sure it is motivated by the content. An example of this would be a character discovering something important and pushing into a close-up to show the reaction. Or slowly pushing in while a character is lost in thought.

I think you did a great job on this and chose a really suitable story. Excited to see what you do next!

[Jitendas.10]

Thank you Tobbg for loving my work
And thank you for your tips rafael, i ll follow it....

Regards

[chucky]

Nice to see a full story, simple but effective.
Good advice from Raphael too.

[Jitendas.10]

Thank u chucky

Will try to improve in my next film.

Regards

[Little Yamori]

A very pleasant story

[Jitendas.10]

Little Yamori
Thank you vry much.