我的自画像

[Barry Baker]

Impressive animation, Sang, perhaps OVER-animated in parts. For example, there are about three large anticipation moves on the girl before she stands up (one would have been enough), and the follow through on her hair makes her look like she is underwater. Generally, although I like the overall look you have here, you could tone down some of the movement. Less is sometimes more. (I hope what I write still makes sense after translation to your language)

[sang820]

Impressive animation, Sang, perhaps OVER-animated in parts. For example, there are about three large anticipation moves on the girl before she stands up (one would have been enough), and the follow through on her hair makes her look like she is underwater. Generally, although I like the overall look you have here, you could tone down some of the movement. Less is sometimes more. (I hope what I write still makes sense after translation to your language)

谢谢~~Barry Baker
1-过度预备。（站起前有3个压缩动作）
2-头发像在水中。（这被很多人提起=3）

感谢你的意见，谢谢。
我想以我的方式致敬【可能不会再更新的Moho 13】（我太悲观了）

我喜欢【水里的头发】 我认为它特别美丽，动画是梦。