Check out my animation on Youtube Player. All in Moho except background painting (imported as PNG into moho) and sound... Done in two weeks. Leave comments. It always helps and is encouraging. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vjdUNMAW4B0
1. The big monkey wrench thing looks like it has very little weight, which kind of spoils the effect
2. At the end, the movement of the thug running away is less convincing than the movements of the two guys in the beginning.
But I thought the choice of shots was good, nice simple storyline, and the guy getting electrocuted was funny (well, as funny as electrocution could ever be...!) Well done!
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
I liked your character design and your backgrounds were really very nice. You also had generally good poses and nice staging. The walks and runs had feet slipping which spoiled the effect for me. Nice job for two weeks work!