The story of my Anime is like this (pps. I already created a manga of this, becaus I thought that would be easier and):
"The goddess of the Storms, Tsuwara, drops here Magic Feather (named Jujutsu Hane, just as the Anime itself). It accidently falls in the Human World and a girl, Mimiro, playing Hide and Seek touches the feather (because she collects feathers) and transforms into a Harpy with powers to control the storms. Luckily, because Mimiro is good-natured, she will use her powers to protect the world from demons Tsuwara send (because Tsuwara was furious)."
And this is why I don't care for anime STORY LINES.
One paragraph... and I completely lost track of it, and have no idea what the point is... except a reason to have swooshing sword battles incessantly with huge demons. After a while we forget or don't care why there is a conflict.
They sound like stream of consciousness to me... like they are made up as they go along. They have complex rules and totally rely on "deux ex machina" constantly to save the hero or solve the conflict.
I loved the movie Spirited Away and I think it was a great film but even so... the plot line... what plot line? The plots are so... complicated! The characters change their motivations and personalities like changing clothes.
Isn't there room for a simple story any more?
Some of you new young animators just getting started should throw out the
Anime Plot Line Generator Pro® you have in your heads and go for something much more simple to start out with.
Try the classics like Asoep's fables or dramatic versions of public domain fairy tales or children's stories. Or at least READ those types of stories to see WHY they became classics.
Sometimes a story line with a logical and simple beginning middle and end can be just as entertaining and also easier to produce for a first time project.
That story line quoted above could be a cookie cut idea from every anime plot out there. Sorry but it just gets lost in the fog.
Now Ultra Man... when I was a kid that was great stuff. I didn't understand the plot at all but it was cool. What ever happened to Ultra Man anyway?
-vern